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PB3

Part 1 Overall I thought my presentation was super good and I really did work hard on it and gave it all my all to deliver good interesting content. Based on the feedback I have received from my classmates majority of the feedback had to with trying to be a little bit more specific with my topic for the ACURA project. In this case it was maybe to focus more on a particular sport instead of looking at how VR simulations work in the world of sports. One specific sport would help get me to that small nesting doll that we have been doing for a while in class. Also there was a suggestion of maybe talking about how VR simulations would help athletes that are just coming off of injury. It would add more to the topic. Some say that I could projected my voice and spoke louder. Honestly I thought in my head that I was talking kind of loud, but I guess it was just in my head. Based off these suggestions I am thinking about doing a specific sport, but this is rather difficult because there isn’t

Elevator Pitch

Introduction: Name, Topic being talked about Explain Topic: VR simulation in sports Why would it be effective for athletes?: Less injury? Faster recovery? Statistics that have shown how it has improved athletes performances.

W9 L1

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Did Not Meet Expectations Met Expectations Exceeded Expectations Organization/ Structure Elevator Pitch: Persuasive, 90 Secs Analysis on Scholarly Sources The conventions of the WP2 and what would make it a good project/presentation is that it includes all the things needed such as the 2 scholarly journals and the analysis of them. Of course for the project to be good you personally have to be interested in the topic and discipline that you picked. If you are passionate, interested in the topic it would be easier for the audience to be invested in your product/topic. What makes an elevator pitch an elevator pitch is that it has to be really compelling and attention grabbing for a short amount of time. 20-30 seconds should be the length on an elevator pitch and it should be about an overview of an idea, business or product that you’re trying to make someone interested in.

PB2B

Chao, K., Chen, C., & Li, C. (2013). A PRELIMINARY STUDY OF BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE IN SPORTS: A PERFORMANCE-SALARY MODEL OF PLAYER VIA ARTIFICIAL NEURAL NETWORK. International Journal of Electronic Business Management, 11(1), 13-22. Content: “Artificial neural network is a teaching tool with the principle of processing information through simulating human brain” Based off the article there is a lot of data and statistics thrown around because it mentions as the evaluation of a players performance from when they are about to hit free agency and they years that they won’t hit free agency. There are many type of performance options that are evaluated in the paper and it is based of different goals of the players and how much they play. Construction: For the paper they actually listed the structure of how the paper was written. Instead of just having regular headings they divided it up by chapters. Chapter 2: Literature Review, in this chapter, we will review relevant regulations on M

PB2A Parts 3-5

Part 3: How does one determine in the sports industry how much is a player worth and how do you know it is the correct value? Does this impact the sports organization? Is it useful to have a female coach to a male team? How does a female and male think regarding certain situation that lead to in game decision making? Should college student athletes be paid? How would artificial intelligent umpires impact the baseball industry? Part 4: Sports, Leadership, Gender Roles (Men, Women), Human Behavior, Artificial Intelligence, Baseball, Contracts, Value Part 5: Chao, K., Chen, C., & Li, C. (2013). A PRELIMINARY STUDY OF BUSINESS INTELLIGENCE IN SPORTS: A PERFORMANCE-SALARY MODEL OF PLAYER VIA ARTIFICIAL NEURAL NETWORK. International Journal of Electronic Business Management, 11(1), 13-22. A review of virtual environments for training in ball sports by Miles, Helen C; Pop, Serban R; Watt, Simon J; Lawrence, Gavin P; John, Nigel W Computers & Graphics, 10/2012, Volume 36, Issue 6 Lesl

PB2A Part 1&2

Honestly I really want to do something involving sports management or psychology regarding sports, but I didn’t really get the sense that there was anyone studying something specific to that topic. The closest I can find was in the Business major. Professor Goldberg research interest in Business and Human Behavior and Motivation sounds the most intriguing. I believe since he studies business and human behavior that there can be something to look at of the human behavior of the sports business/industry. This can go in many ways with decisons of who to hire for certain teams, how much a player should get paid, etc.

Reverse Outline Extra Credit of WP1

Paragraph # 1 The home pages of the websites for Herbalife Nutrition, Trifecta Nutrition and Nutrition Solutions do exactly that they all simplify things for the audience. Paragraph # 2 How the conventions on Herbalife Nutritions homepage is successful and unsuccessful on attracting an audience Paragraph #3 How the conventions/rhetorical appeal on the Trifecta Nutrition homepage were more effective then the homepage of Herbalife Nutrition Paragraph #4 State what Nutrition Solutions had on its homepage and why it was good or bad Paragraph #5 I state that Trifecta Nutrition did a better job at presenting its information to the audience and why The organizational approach that I used for my WP1 was the 5 paragraph approach with the Introduction, 3 Body Paragraphs and the Conclusion. The reason I did this is because I have been doing this structure for most of my school career and that is how teachers usually want use to format the paragraph. Al